I enjoyed it, except for one thing.
The second scene didn't feel like it was part of the overall whole. I'm pretty sure that was due to the amount of motion in the background, as the other scenes didn't really have that. Plus, the text seemed to wobble.
At the very end, it ended abruptly. I'm not sure if that was on purpose, but maybe you could try easing out the soundtrack to make it a little less jolting?
In all, pretty good, I'd watch it.